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Concept - US-M6Q3 Abraham-J by FontesMakua Concept - US-M6Q3 Abraham-J by FontesMakua
The same way I remade it's pilot's design in a subtle way, I've retouched Abraham-J as well. While the pilot was just for the looks, this one was for at least 2 reasons:

1- The old shoulderpads, and the way they turn into a secondary pair of arms worked like... it didn't. It relied on disposable plating, which is one heck of a waste. Also, all 4 arms look the same, so there's some streamlining.
2- Weapon holdsters are pretty much useless, considering how weaponry works with these robots. You'll get it when you see it.

In fact, this was my THIRD try at it. And yes, this means that this frame's final artwork will be redone, along with it's pilot's. Like I said before, that's development for ye.

Old Concept:

There is some really nice attention paid to How Things Work in this design. Impressive! The second set of arms gimmick took a minute for me to figure out, but I like it. Very clever.

Your Vision gets high marks because the machine's concept is very well executed and pretty clear just from looking at the picture.

Your originality gets high marks becayse while this machine fits quite easily into the (rather standardized) Gundam-series GM format, it has plenty of visual cues that set it apart from such things. Same for Patlabor and other moderately Real-type robots.

Technique is highly marked because the lines are clean and clear, coloring is simple but does precisely the job it is supposed to. Professional.

Impact is a little lower simply because the machine, its rendering, and its posture are all fine, but did not make me go "wow cool!"

There are one or two things I would change but they would be based purely on personal taste. I think this is very well done!
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Grebo-Guru Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Clever and sharp!!
WithintheMechanism Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
Nice, modular look. Easy to conceptualize.
screenscan Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013   Interface Designer
nice one!
little cutie it is :)
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